3rd

Charter:Lowla

Overall the chart’s structure is quite nice, the use of long note obviously was the highlight of the chart, and I do love the overall thoughts of the patterns. The charter successfully combied note and long note during the dub part of the song, and it did create wonderful gameplay experience.

Your thoughts were quite nice, and long notes were comfortable to play. Keep going with your wonderful thoughts on charting!

Kick = 2 notes, seems overmapped.

4th

Charter:tkdkendo

7 key was obviously performed better than 4 key in this song. Some jacks and pattern design were wonderful, the only pity of this chart was that the burst in this chart were slightly uncomfortable to play.

It seems you made some mistake at 43-46 as to follow the previous logic in pattern. Some high-density part such as 100-101 created a difficulty spike, which needed further discussion as it did some impact to the whole chart difficulty.

Cool.

Some 32th notes were quite strange.

5th

Charter:rak_

The structure of this chart was quite good, and did a wonderful design on long note. No problem.

Cool.

Long notes were quite nice.

22nd

Charter:Matutake

Cool, I can see the charter have some ideas on the use of long notes and jacks.

The spotlight of this chart was that the charter did a gradually increase on difficulty, which was pretty nice for gameplay experience. I would like to give you a small suggestion was that you could replace some short long notes to normal note, and it creates a better visual effect on your chart. Some patterns could be better improved by doing that. Some long notes at piano part were quite strange, and it’s way too abrupt to use 16th at 194.

So first of all, One way street was a bit easier on sound catching than Freefall. The tracks were seperated clearly, and groove wasn’t too much. Therefore the charter wouldn’t have many choices on how to express them. This course song was testing the charter’s ability on choosing main elements of the song, rather than expressing them. Unfortunately you were in the wrong direction, some patterns were quite unbalanced. Reducing the weight on sub-elements is crucial.

Overmapped. Layering could be improved.

37th

Charter:m1serable

Some long notes were quite nice to play, and were expressive. And the use of grace was also cool. Except these highlights, I believe the chart could be better improved on patterns.

The whole chart was way too casual, you could refer A01 for general mapping thoughts.

Strange jacks.

This chart have some critical inconsistency problems.

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Charter:PiraPie

Relied on symmetrical pattern way too much!

5Key wasn't only for symmetrical pattern.

Some layering could be improved, you could follow drums and build up parts.