The 13th Marlo Cup Mapping Contest(Pad): Ongeki

Basic rules

1. The theme of the current contest is ongeki, only the original song from ongeki is a valid entry.

2. The difficulty of your chart should be Lv.9 (Qubell) or higher.

3. You may prepare your competition entry until 6th, Febuary 2023.

4. You can only submit one entry. If more than one entry is submitted, the entry with the lowest score will be the final score.

How to submit your chart

1. Please login with the shared account and upload your chart to the server. please contact AyaseEli or join the QQ group: 240325120 to obtain the information of this shared account.

2. The submission time is from 6th, Febuary 2023 00:00 (GMT+8) to 8th, Febuary 2023 00:00 (GMT+8), the submission time is based on the time displayed on the webpage, please leave enough time to avoid the submission failure due to bad network.

Requirements of the submission

1. Please don't reveal the chart you create before the results come out.

2. The song info of your entry should be correct, including the composer name, song title, and correct offset. Your creator name should be anonymous. It's better that your entry has a cover.

3. To avoid temporary plagiarism, it is strictly forbidden to modify your entry once it has been uploaded unless there is a major accident such as a wrong chart being uploaded. Without proper reasons, any entry uploaded more than once will be disqualified.

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If you have any other questions, please contact AyaseEli or join the QQ group malody pad mapper (group number: 240325120) to obtain more information about this contest.

Requirements of the peer review

1. All creators must participate in the peer review! The score of your entry is obtained from the peer review session.

2. You should rate other creators' charts through the anonymous questionnaire (Click here to jump to the questionnaire page) before 15th, Febuary 2023 00:00 (GMT+8). Please don't double submit the questionnaires.

3. Peer review rules: Please mark "-1" for your own entry, and rate other entries from 0.0 to 10.0.

4. External review rules: Please rate every entry from 0.0 to 10.0.

5. Please do not give unreasonable rating, otherwise your contribution to the final score will be reduced.

Entries

Result

Champion

Creator: EXT

Score:8.717

Number of questionnaire(s) speculated correct: 4

Creator who is speculated the most: ugui

Creator’s words

这就是音击吧

Comments

混沌邪恶……打不动,溜了溜了

不会看人 但是扎味?

脑补音打起来有点不舒服 其他挺好的 很喜欢这种反复强调轴心的谱 送你捞曾模仿大奖赛冠军

还挺牛

有记忆点,谱面流畅,写的真好,爽快!

诡谲多押塞爆薯钢琴意外很合适感觉写谱的功底挺强的曾是你吗

神谱 逢坂茜一嗓子吓我1miss

后半的出张四押走心了 无论是采音还是排列都能看出深厚功底 很值得我学习

AyaseEli

AyaseEli

Second Place

Creator: Malody Pad Mapper Lv.999

Score:8.445

Number of questionnaire(s) speculated correct: 2

Creator who is speculated the most: bin & AyaseEli

Creator’s words

中间写萎了对不起!!

Comments

也是很牛逼的一张谱 不过中间个别地方设计有些违和

爽!

如此规整对称的谱面!曲子也很牛结尾再给点变化就给满分了。

配置有些不好打,其他没啥问题

太卡手了怎么卡怎么写!!!!!!!节奏又怪双手又忙又卡

坏了 这个也是扎味?

交互跳拍都有些,有些段落手感很好,有些就一般般。似乎太工整了

AyaseEli

AyaseEli

Third Place

Creator: 東雲つむぎの彼氏

Score:8.439

Number of questionnaire(s) speculated correct: 3

Creator who is speculated the most: END233

Creator’s words

憋了大半天的奇技淫巧还是比不过群友们扎实的功底 写出来的东西软绵绵的 我还是得多学多练

Comments

谱面契合度很高

低速24分贪吃蛇竟然如此迷人

整不会了 给个平均分吧

很喜欢两段三连 打起来手感很好 与其说写的好不如说歌好写 感觉这歌挺适合地鼠的 112小节挡手 240 248两个小节阴间接续都是扣分点

中间段落不错有意思,可以再优化一下,写的很棒了

有创新和记忆点,但是是不是有点激进

开头和结尾是可以给10分的水平,但是dubstep段和drop24分就相对地缺少了点设计感,并不是说不好,只是开头和结尾太好了。

AyaseEli

AyaseEli

Awesome Competitors

Creator: Misumi Aoi

Score: 8.017

Number of questionnaire(s) speculated correct: 3

Creator who is speculated the most: Niconi

Creator’s words

本来想投dazzle hop结果写成狗屎还塞不下只能写这首了 还挺好听的

Comments

整体挺不错 不过个别锁手的手顺有些奇怪

斜钢琴挺合适的!就是可以试着在第二段重复的时候加一点密度。结尾元素最多的时候密度反而变低了,无论是采音策略还是空间利用率都做得不够好。

平稳的高质量谱面

平平无奇,没有很多新意也没不舒服的地方

写的还是不错的,也有特点,选曲品味扣2分,下次立秋杯再来

手感 踩音都算上乘 思路不出彩 没有其他参赛谱有意思

乱打加速有趣,结构很清晰,有美感。但是,伤心的人不听慢歌!

谁学我写谱

AyaseEli

AyaseEli

Creator: 譜面-131111号

Score: 8.226

Number of questionnaire(s) speculated correct: 1

Creator who is speculated the most: ugui

Creator’s words

(空)

Comments

非常契合曲子 暴力重金属 排列非常硬 然后个别地方有些乱

这年头能有这样的创意并在有限的格子里发挥出来真的很难得,手感也很不错~

采音辛苦了。开头的重音很迷惑,感觉和双押对不上,配置倒是挺契合的。

不要写duality 没封面-1分

本来还想给高点,后面难度加太多了

没封面扣一分太懒了其他一般

龟味?

很硬的手感写出来了!16分n连的配置有点卡手

AyaseEli

AyaseEli

Creator: Hi Touch!!!.

Score: 8.015

Number of questionnaire(s) speculated correct: 0

Creator who is speculated the most: Niconi

Creator’s words

音鸡的歌真吗又臭又长 强行塞个开幕长押段挺煞风景

Comments

很强

爽谱 律动感Max

很少见的以swing节奏为主体的投稿,发狂颇有strayedcatz的美感。但就算是pad模式也要追求严谨的跟音,比如88拍、111拍、120拍、141拍等都有比较明显的跟音错误。特别是141拍以及类似的地方,在以swing节奏为主体的歌曲中不可能突然出现16分的节奏的,中间段节奏也应该是x-x--xx,而不是xx-xx。但是pad模式管他呢。

我觉得迷途猫有一个就够了

**跳拍都长这样啊*

跳拍滚出地球

很综合很好玩的配置,有点像虫凄

AyaseEli

AyaseEli

Creator: 百合 is god.

Score: 8.154

Number of questionnaire(s) speculated correct: 1

Creator who is speculated the most: xipigu & fanzhen0019

Creator’s words

(空)

Comments

萌萌二刺螈 整体设计也是中规中矩的二味 但又不缺乏亮点 是很好的学习对象

一堆硬核里插入一个百合曲 suki 加分

感觉像打出了一张无懈可击。

百合给个吉利数

这歌也就这样,写不出啥高级玩意来

哎哟我操,官味儿十足

太普通的9下位了

封面10

稳定发挥。结尾大钢琴能把狗吓一跳。

AyaseEli

AyaseEli

Creator: fanzhen0019

Score: 7.493

Number of questionnaire(s) speculated correct: 0

Creator who is speculated the most: bin & honoohane

Creator’s words

哈哈,是我

Comments

配置很贴合曲的踩音,难点控制也很有意思。硬要说点不足,我不太喜欢天地长押+单双压的这个配置,虽然这也是ub常见的高难配置写法……

7分不可以再加价了

这谱我写过 巨难写 这张已经写的很可以了 扣分点主要是挡手和迷之出张 还有开幕巨卡左手一下就癖了

呃啊,卡手卡手

说实话歌很好,也有特点,但感觉可以写得更好,这谱给人一种卡手怪异感,不太流畅,跟音也许可以更好?

爽谱,但存在一些奇怪的地方,结尾为了设计配置强行降低密度不可取。

8分短hold在这游戏里手感奇差欸!

锁手的逻辑很怪 能看出来作者ub力还是比较强的 但可能写谱风格比较独树一帜

AyaseEli

AyaseEli

-Please delete the chart that violate the submission rules.-

Creator: キツネノコト

Score: 8.052

Number of questionnaire(s) speculated correct: 5

Creator who is speculated the most: PomeloY

Creator’s words

没想到有人写浊流比我还狠

Comments

第一反应津轻雪 神曲配神谱初印象 不过整体有点单调 但一些细节很牛逼 值得学习

观感不错 就是好JB初见杀

副歌锁手小三角没啥美感,我觉得老老实实走爽谱路线也可以的。往下一扒拉那个还挺好玩的。

还可以,有设计,有亮点,但感觉里面有些配置不好看…

还行,很多细节没有优化,下次早点写

oldschool

:三连配置不错,很有感觉,锁手小浊流也很有创意。有些地方长押显得不必要,细节最好可以打磨一下。

能感觉到除了两个核心配置 纵三连和浊流可圈可点外 其他地方不太经雕琢 用的都是标准化配置

And...

Creator: 神威纵连王

Score: 8.196

Number of questionnaire(s) speculated correct: 2

Creator who is speculated the most: ugui & clamare

Creator’s words

写个逼谱给大家玩玩 发狂段纵连尽量按照音调拆开了 结尾纵连写了个叉风 在麦麦 音姬 chuni任何一个机种上打过这歌的人都应该会觉得写的还算还原吧

Comments

神威纵连王 这种密度能排列这么漂亮非常牛逼

能把陆泽的歌写得这个水平属实不容易 多给你一分补补脑细胞(

真想撬开你的脑子看看里面都装了什么神配置,嫉妒死了。

标志性的高速单手扭麻花和灰烬转圈圈捏,但是个人总觉得not very顺手(?

没啥新意,副歌也就复制黏贴,结尾属实不太行

6

本届手感最好之一,除了尾杀哈人好像也没啥毛病了

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